The first time I saw this sentence, a lot of things popped into my mind. One of them was about a couple I knew in China.Their love story is quite unbelievable, at least, for me, and it helped me have a better understanding of love.
The man was an American who used to be an entrepreneur and earned a lot of money, but he was cheated by the other cmpanies and became bankrupt later. The girl was a Chinese and worked in a game company in China as a common staff who answered the phones from customers. And this was how they got to know each other-the man bought the game and once called the company due to some problems, and it is this girl who answered the phone. They fell in love afterwards. Regardless of the long distance and entirely different backgrounds, they were in love for five years without seeing each other face to face even once. Five years later, the man flew to China and married that girl. Recently, they have given birth to a cute boy in China and planned to go to America next year.
Living in two countries is already a giant obstacle for lovers, let alone they had never met. Nevertheless, the couple chose to believe in and stick to their love. The girl chose to be with the man even he was a loser in business. The man chose to marry the girl in spite of the distance. What I have learned from their story is that thinking twice and listening to your heart before making every choice for love, because different choices can lead to the ways that poles apart. Once you make up your mind, go for it and never regret.
After commending your fluent language and good use of transitional words, I have to admit that it is really a touching story though I don't believe its truty at all....Perhaps you made up this story to make yourself believe in your choice, ahahahahaha
ReplyDeleteBelieve it or not, it is a true story which happened in an English school in Xi'an, because I used to be a student there. There are things in life which sounds unrealistic, but aren't them make life beautiful and interesting?
ReplyDeleteI think you should mention this sentence –“Love is a choice ”again in your start although it is your topic.
ReplyDeleteIn the second part ,you retell the story to us .However ,I think it would be better if you add a link sentence at the end of your second part.
You said “Living in two countries is already a giant obstacle for lovers, let alone they had never met”, but you do not mention it before.(I consider them moved to America).Furthermore ,I suggest you describing more barriers they had to face and experience that happened after their marriage, and you may put your topic/main idea –“Love is a choice ”again .
Nevertheless, I enjoy your story very much. And I am really moved by the story ,because of their firmly believe of their love.
truthfully speaking, i really wonder what is love,especially in a case like this one. how can people tell themselves that they are in love with someone? maybe it is just some kind of friendship. after all, you can have a lot of friends of the opposite gender. the thing is, how do you distinguish the so-called love from the rest?
ReplyDeleteIt's hard to say what love is. But someday you might meet one person that make you wake up and feel that she is the right one for you.
ReplyDeleteAs people say, sometimes it is difficult to express and explain regarding matters of the heart. Only people who experience such a feeling can understand and appreciate the true meaning of love.
ReplyDeleteLove is hard to explain~~~ Someone may say we should love logically but I think we should love following our hearts. If we always do things logically and with time passing by we may regret for it.
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